The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart demonstrates the average degrees of three African cities throughout the year,
It is clear that
Mombasa had the highest temperature in January.
According to
the chart, Cairo
was the lowest city in temperatures from all others as shown in the graph, However
, it had a significant increase until August when it was at its highest degree through
the yearChange preposition
throughout
,
but dropped gradually from September to December. Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, Cape Town is completely opposite to Cairo
in seasons, in the months June
, July and August it had the lowest average temperatures, Change preposition
of June
Where as
Egypt had the hottest weather in these three months, which means that summer in Correct your spelling
Whereas
Cairo
is actually winter in Cape Town.
In conclusion, Mombasa and Cape Town share the same Season periods, whereas
Egypt is opposite to them, for illustration, if its
summer in Correct your spelling
it's
Cairo
, it will be winter in South Africa and Kenya.Submitted by yazanalt523 on
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