the graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs show data regarding
ownership
of computers as a percentage
of the population, And by level
of educational degree in 2002 and 2010.
From an overall
pointview
, over the years the the number of individuals owning a computer has increased constantly.
Correct your spelling
point view
Firstly
, the percentage
of ownership
in 2002 was just under 60%, increasing by almost 5% each year. This
means that within 8 years the number reached its peak at almost 80% by 2010.
Secondly
, Regarding the relationship between educational level
and the percentage
of owners We can see that in both years (2002 and 2010) the number of computer ownership
is increasing with every higher level
of degree, The percentage
of computer owners without high
school diploma in 2002 was around 15%, Correct article usage
a high
While
ones with postgraduate qualification were almost 75%. The same increase happened in 2010 where
people with no high school degree were around 45% and post-graduates just above 90%.
Correct word choice
when
To sum up
, 2010 ownership
numbers were much higher than 2002 numbers over all the level
of education. the same statement can be applied to the percentage
of the population.Submitted by llaora on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership, percentage, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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