The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of households in rented and owned accommodation in Wales and England in 2011.
It is clear that
the rented house
Fix the agreement mistake
houses
are
very popular from 1918 to 1971, Wrong verb form
were
whereas
, the owned accommodation
Fix the agreement mistake
accommodations
are
famous from 1971 to 2011.
First of all, Wrong verb form
were
1918
, the rented household was the highest with nearly 80%. But from 1939 to 2001, they have dramatically dropped from nearly 70% down to 31%. Change preposition
in 1918
Then
, they have a small increased
Replace the word
increase
by
approximately 5%.
Change preposition
of
Second,
the owned accommodation was lowest in 1919 and rise
year by year with a little Replace the word
rose
percent
each year. And in 2001, the Change the spelling
per cent
owned
households was highest with nearly 70%. Correct quantifier usage
number of owned
However
, in 2011 they have
a significant decrease.Wrong verb form
had
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