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The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about the various levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the percentage of
men
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 and
women
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 who undertook them in the year 1999. In general, there are five levels of after-school qualifications : skilled vocational
diploma
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, undergraduate
diploma
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, bachelor's
degree
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, postgraduate
diploma
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 and masters
degree
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. It is conspicuous that out of the five former mentioned degrees, skilled vocational
diploma
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, postgraduate
diploma
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 and master's
degree
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 were a popular choice among
men
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 comparatively.
In contrast
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, the percentage of
women
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 holding an undergraduate
diploma
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 and a bachelor's
degree
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 was higher than that of
men
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. 90% of
men
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 pursued a skilled vocational
degree
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 which accounts for the highest enrolment of
men
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 and lowest by their female counterparts. The proportion of
women
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 holding an undergraduate
diploma
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 was 70% which is twice of
men
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.
On the contrary
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, a higher participation of
men
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 was witnessed in the postgraduate
diploma
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 which was more than twice
of
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that of
women
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.
Overall
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, the percentage of males and females holding qualifications decreases as the level increases.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, diploma, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • levels
  • post-school qualifications
  • proportion
  • men
  • women
  • held
  • clear gender disparity
  • Certificate I
  • Certificate II
  • Certificate III
  • Certificate IV
  • Diploma or Higher
  • highest proportion
  • decreases
  • overall
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