The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates data regarding export earnings in different
categories
between 2015 and 2016. The table provides the percentage change in values of each category in 2016, compared with 2015.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the value of all categories
has upward trends except gems and jewellery which witnessed a downward trend. Moreover
, petroleum products and engineerd
goods earned far more than the others. Correct your spelling
engineering
Although
textiles earned the least in 2015, it experienced a significant growth compared with other categories
.
In a
closer observation, the figure Remove the article
apply
of
engineered goods was a little less than that Change preposition
for
of
petroleum products, but it increased by 8.5% as opposed to 3%, making these two Change preposition
for
categories
finished
around Wrong verb form
finish
over
60 $Change preposition
apply
billion
. On the contrary
, gems and jewellery declined by 5.18% to approximately 40 $billion
. As for textiles, which earned about 25 billion
at first,
has a considerably
rise from 15.24% to around 30 Change the adverb
considerable
billion
, resulting in ending with just over 30 billion
, the same figure as agricultural products which rose merely 0.81%.Submitted by rasita.pare on
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