The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different

 attractions in Brighton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the globetrotters who visited Brighton in England at four types of tourist places between 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart, that the biggest attraction was the Festival, which 30% of tourists visited in 1980 and it shrunk to 27% in 1985 and
further
, it plunged to 35% in 1995 after a small increment, it constant to 27% from 2000 to 2010.
In addition
, people liked to visit the Pavilion, which was 24% in 1980 after it increased dramatically until reached 48% in 1995 and reversed to 35% in 2000 and it started declining marginally to nearly 31% in 2010. Probing ahead, the number of visitors who visited Art Galleries was 22% in 1980 and sharply expanded to 35% in a five-year period after that it lessened abruptly and attained 20% in one decade.
Further
, it showed some fluctuations and fell to 9% in 2010.
In addition
, the Pier was the least attractive site for visitors between 1980 to 2005 and had some movements after that it augmented sharply at a peak of 22% in 2010.
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