The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The par chart illustrates
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in
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reasons
of work
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for working
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from
home
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between
male
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males
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and females in 2019. the data are
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measured
in percentages.
overall
, the majority of people chose to work at
home
to save money .
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diffrent
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difference
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women
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rate who
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work from
home
because it
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is esier
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esier
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easier
childcare
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. on the one hand, most
of
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workers
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the workers
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preffer
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prefer
to
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work
from
home
to save
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money by 45% and 42% for males and females
respetively
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respectively
.
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However
, a huge
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of girls compared with
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boys
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doing their tasks at
home
becous
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because
it
easier
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is easier
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for
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to
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be
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attention
for
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their kids at 26% for females .
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, the rate of males who
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think
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online working is more productive is 24%
wich
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which
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make
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makes
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it higher than
woman
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women
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by around
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duble
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double
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Vocabulary: Replace the words home with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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