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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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the line graph
show
Change the verb form
shows
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 the manufacturing of 3 natural products which
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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 pulp, timber, and
paper
Use synonyms
 through the years
of
Change preposition
apply
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1980 to 2000
overral
Correct your spelling
Overall
,
while
Linking Words
paper
Use synonyms
 production was rising standardly, the
tow
Correct your spelling
two
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 other products were fluctuating and not steady. as we can see
paper
Use synonyms
 was growing steadily till the year 1995,
where
Correct word choice
when
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 it started slowing, in reverse to the
tow
Correct your spelling
two
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 other goods,
whereas
Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
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pulp and timber started growing
at
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in
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 the exact same year if we take a look
to
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at
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 the period between 1980 and 1995
it is clear that
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 the production of pulp and
paper
Use synonyms
 was unstable,
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however
Add a comma
however,
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 the production of them was gradually rising after the year 1995.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Production levels
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Comparison
  • 20-year period
  • Data
  • Forest industry products
  • Percentage
  • Amount
  • European country
  • Analysis
  • Observation
  • Graph
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