The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time (excluding email). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide information about the
percentage
of time
young people
(18–26 age group) and old people
(60–70 age group) spend on internet activities in their leisure time
.
In general, younger people
spend too much time
on social networking. On the other hand
, older people
spend a high percentage
of their time
making bookings, e
.g
., for cinema or travel.
To begin
with, the biggest percentage
spent by young people
is social networking, at 24%. It follows that the percentages are accessing music and films and researching, e
.g
., health data, at 21% and 20%, respectively. In detail, the next percentage
is playing games and making purchases—just under 20%. Even though the least
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lowest
percentage
is making bookings, e
.g
., cinema or travel, at 5%,.
In contrast
with a
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e
.g
. cinema/travel is the highest percentage
in the age of old people
at 25%. In addition
, the second leads by researching, e
.g
., health data and social networking, at around 22% and 21% of each. However
, the percentage
of people
accessing music or films and making purchases is unpopular—just under 20% of both. Additionally
, playing games is a small percentage
(at 5%) used by old people
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