You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: - apologise for the damage to the item - explain what happened - say how you are going to fix the issue

#**you #friend #**write #**apologise #damage #item** #**explain #happened** #**say #issue**

Dear Neha, How are you doing? I'

writing

this

letter to make an apology about the

watch

I borrowed from you

last

week. I'

really sorry for the damage and loss it caused to you, but I assure

that

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you that

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ready to bear all the expense it has created for you. Let me explain

you

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to you

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all the situation in detail.

Last

week, I borrowed

this

watch

from you because I was going to attend my annual school competition where I wore

this

watch

along with

my formal attire as I was going to deliver a welcoming speech for new

enrolls

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enrols

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but

while

playing with friends after

competition

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the competition

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I fell off in a playground where your

watch

got some scratches

along with

broken mirror. I felt very bad, and immediately I returned home on that day. I promise you I will not hand over

this

watch

to you until it

get

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fixed.

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apply

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I've already talked to a mechanic living near

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apply

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my house, who

guranteed

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guaranteed

me to repair

this

watch

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affordable price with

five

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years

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five-year

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warranty,

also

he is going to fix all the issues it had before

this

incident. Again, I'

really sorry for the inconvenience I caused to you. I hope you

would

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will

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not be missing your

watch

a lot. Yours Regards, Amanjot Kaur.

Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on Mon Jul 01 2024

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grammar

Watch out for minor grammatical issues and typos, such as 'guranteed' which should be 'guaranteed' and 'an apology about' which should be 'an apology for.'

coherence

Consider breaking up long sentences to improve readability. For example, "I'm really sorry for the damage and loss it caused to you, but I assure that I'm ready to bear all the expense it has created for you." can be split into two sentences.

task achievement

You have clearly addressed all parts of the task, providing a comprehensive response.

tone

The tone of the letter is very appropriate and friendly, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

structure

The letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs that each address a specific point.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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