The line graph represents the data requested by tourists at a tourist office in the United Kingdom over the period of 6 months, from January to June. (In person, by letter, by telephone)
Overall
, requests for information in person and by telephone increased. However
, information by email decreased from the beginning.
As to the data demand by mobile devices, during the first month
it went down from 900 to 800 followed by Add a comma
month,
continuous
increment during the next months. Regarding getting information in person, from January to June it increased dramatically from 400 to 1900, roughly 450 %.
Correct article usage
a continuous
On the other hand
, email usage for info decreased by 500, from 800 to 300 in a span of 5 months.Submitted by ayshanngurbanova on
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