The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the Canterbury
town
where planning is going on to build a new school. Two locations have been suggested for this
purpose.
Overall
, this
town
is a blend of human habitations surrounded by lush green fields. Most interestingly, the Town
Centre which is in the middle of the residential sector is a complete traffic-free zone. A main road crosses this
housing area, going towards two ends of the town
. This
small community also
has a university on the North side. In addition
, there seem to be other communities nearby and the schools would probably be accommodating the children from those dwellings as well.
The first proposed location is on the Northeast side of the map in the countryside area just near the houses. If approved, this
educational institute would be located at a distance of 5 kilometres from the nearest town
of Sturry which has 7000 residents.
The second place under consideration is in the town
centre, which is surrounded by an area where no cars can enter. A broader view of the map shows that this
site also
falls almost in the centre of the whole Canterbury town
. The nearest neighbourhood to this
school is 7 kilometres away, named Chartham, with a population of 4500 people.Submitted by dr.aqeelazafar on
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