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The pie charts below show unitsof electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show unitsof electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate how much
electricity
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 was produced by different fuel
sources
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 in
Australia
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 and France in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that in
Australia
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, the majority of
electricity
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 was generated from coal.
Additionally
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,
although
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 coal and natural gas were the main
sources
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 of
electricity
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 in France in 1980, nuclear power became the primary source of
electricity
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production
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 in 2000.
To begin
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 with, in 1980,
Australia
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 produced 100
units
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 of
electricity
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 and half of
this
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electricity
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 was generated from coal
sources
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.
However
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, in 2000, the total
production
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 of
electricity
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 increased to 170
units
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 with 130
units
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 of
this
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 total number belonging to coal
sources
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. Oil and natural gas only generated 2
units
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 which were considerably lower than that of 1980, with 10 and 20
units
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, respectively.
Besides
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, nuclear power was not introduced in
Australia
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 during those years. Shifting to France, it is apparent that the total
production
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 doubled from 90
units
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 in 1980 to 180
units
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 in 2000. The most obvious change was the dramatic growth in the
production
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 of
electricity
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 from nuclear power
sources
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, which jumped from 15
units
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 in 1980 to 126
units
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 in 2000.
In addition
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 to
this
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, despite the noticeable fall in the usage of hydropower and natural gas
sources
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, the
units
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 of
electricity
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 generated by oil and coal remained constant, with 25
units
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 in both 1980 and 2000.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, sources, australia, production, units with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • electricity production
  • fuel source
  • percentage
  • units of electricity
  • coal
  • natural gas
  • nuclear power
  • hydropower
  • oil
  • renewable energy
  • trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • remain constant
  • proportion
  • notable shift
  • comparatively
  • account for
  • dominant source
  • aggregate change
  • fluctuate
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