The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts compare the proportion of
time
spent by working adults on six different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.
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the majority of Linking Words
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was dedicated to working and sleeping in both years, the least amount of Use synonyms
time
was spent on travel to work. Notably, the Use synonyms
time
allocated for sleeping and going out with friends or family decreased over the period.
In 1958, the largest proportion of Use synonyms
time
was spent on working and sleeping, each accounting for roughly one-third of the total Use synonyms
time
(33% and 32%, respectively). Use synonyms
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as sports was approximately equal, at 8% and 6% respectively. Socializing with friends and family took up 19% of the Linking Words
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the Linking Words
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time
, 2%, was spent on travel to work.
By 2008, the amount of Use synonyms
time
spent working had increased by nearly 10%, rising to 42%. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
time
spent sleeping decreased by 7%, down to 25%. Use synonyms
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spent relaxing at home increased slightly to 13%. Socializing with friends and family saw a significant reduction, dropping by 13% to 6%, the lowest proportion in 2008. Use synonyms
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spent on travel to work increased to 8%, matching the Use synonyms
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allocated to other interests and sports.Use synonyms
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