You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the percentage of Australian
export
with Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Jaban
, US, Correct your spelling
Japan
China
, and India from 1992 to 2012. We can see that Japan in year
period
1990 import
around 26% from Replace the word
imported
Australia
, in
the other hand, Change preposition
on
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
import
from Wrong verb form
imported
Australia
about 12 per
centages in Change preposition
apply
year
Correct article usage
the year
period
2000, Furthermore
, China
has
a Wrong verb form
had
huge-up
in 2012 Correct your spelling
huge
appromexitly
27% in 21th century, Correct your spelling
approximately
in addition
, india import
around 7% from Australia
in 2010.
Overall
, Japan was the most country that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
import
from Wrong verb form
imported
Australia
in 1990, then
start
decreasing in Wrong verb form
started
1992
Change the article
the 1992
year
period
with a appromexitly
22% Correct your spelling
approximately
then
it shows to be steady from 1995 to 2012, Furthermore
, USA
Correct article usage
the USA
import
around 11% in Wrong verb form
imported
1990
Change the article
the 1990
year
period
it start
decreasing until 1995 Wrong verb form
started
then
it start increasing till year
period
2000 with 12%, therefore
it decreasing again till 2010 year
period
then
a light increase
in 2012. In
the Change preposition
On
othe
side, it shows that Correct your spelling
other
china
didn't Capitalize word
China
import
anything from Australia
in 1990, However
, China
start
importing around 1993 with Wrong verb form
started
appromexilty
3% Correct your spelling
approximately
then
it start
a light Wrong verb form
started
increase
till 2002 with
7% and Change preposition
at
start
to Wrong verb form
started
increase
quickly till it reached around 26% in 2012. In addition
, India has
a steady line from 1990 to 2000 with 3% of importing, Wrong verb form
had
Therefore
, it start
to Wrong verb form
started
increase
till 2010 with around 7% then
start
to decrease and in 2012 it was 5%.Wrong verb form
started
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