You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the percentage of Australian
export
with Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Jaban
, US, Correct your spelling
Japan
China
, and India from 1992 to 2012. We can see that Japan in Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
period
1990 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
import
around 26% from Replace the word
imported
Australia
, Use synonyms
in
the other hand, Change preposition
on
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
Use synonyms
import
from Wrong verb form
imported
Australia
about 12 Use synonyms
per
centages in Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
year
Correct article usage
the year
period
2000, Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
China
Use synonyms
has
a Wrong verb form
had
huge-up
in 2012 Correct your spelling
huge
appromexitly
27% in 21th century, Correct your spelling
approximately
in addition
, india Linking Words
import
around 7% from Use synonyms
Australia
in 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Japan was the most country Linking Words
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Use synonyms
import
from Wrong verb form
imported
Australia
in 1990, Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
start
decreasing in Wrong verb form
started
1992
Change the article
the 1992
year
Use synonyms
period
with Use synonyms
a appromexitly
22% Correct your spelling
approximately
then
it shows to be steady from 1995 to 2012, Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
Use synonyms
import
around 11% in Wrong verb form
imported
1990
Change the article
the 1990
year
Use synonyms
period
it Use synonyms
start
decreasing until 1995 Wrong verb form
started
then
it start increasing till Linking Words
year
Use synonyms
period
2000 with 12%, Use synonyms
therefore
it decreasing again till 2010 Linking Words
year
Use synonyms
period
Use synonyms
then
a light Linking Words
increase
in 2012. Use synonyms
In
the Change preposition
On
othe
side, it shows that Correct your spelling
other
Use synonyms
china
didn't Capitalize word
China
import
anything from Use synonyms
Australia
in 1990, Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
China
Use synonyms
start
importing around 1993 with Wrong verb form
started
appromexilty
3% Correct your spelling
approximately
then
it Linking Words
start
a light Wrong verb form
started
increase
till 2002 Use synonyms
with
7% and Change preposition
at
start
to Wrong verb form
started
increase
quickly till it reached around 26% in 2012. Use synonyms
In addition
, India Linking Words
has
a steady line from 1990 to 2000 with 3% of importing, Wrong verb form
had
Therefore
, it Linking Words
start
to Wrong verb form
started
increase
till 2010 with around 7% Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
start
to decrease and in 2012 it was 5%.Wrong verb form
started
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