There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter a. Describe what the problems are b. Explain how these problems are affecting you c. Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am your regular user because of your impeccable services,
however
, from
the Change preposition
for
last
two weeks your company's bus
service has started creating problems, especially it's
punctuality. I have to wait for Correct your spelling
its
long
time at Change the article
a long
bus
station as the Add an article
the bus
bus
's timing does not match the time on the ticket.
Every morning, my work
starts at 8:00, and the regular delay by your bus
makes me late for work
. Moreover
, yesterday I missed my important meeting, dad
showed me Correct word choice
and dad
unprofessional
at my Change the adjective
unprofessionally
work
. Other passengers are facing the same issues.
As a user, I would like to advise the company to take some steps in order to solve this problems
. Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
Firstly
, please inspect the timetable of the bus
. Secondly
, make sure your driver starts work
on time. Lastly
, the company must inform user
prior, Fix the agreement mistake
users
if
some problems occur.
I have implicit faith in you, and I believe you will solve Change preposition
to if
this
matter very soon.
Yours faithfully,
RajSubmitted by rajwants.1997 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical flow is clearer by using connectors effectively between your ideas. Mention specific problems with the bus service and their impact more explicitly, and divide thoughts into well-structured paragraphs.
task achievement
Avoid minor grammatical errors like 'dad showed me unprofessional' which should be 'that showed me to be unprofessional'. Also, note the correct use of apostrophes, for example, change 'its punctuality' instead of 'it's punctuality'.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the task adequately, describing problems, their effects, and offering suggestions.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this kind of letter.