There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter a. Describe what the problems are b. Explain how these problems are affecting you c. Suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir, I am your regular user because of your impeccable services,

however

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the

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two weeks your company's

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service has started creating problems, especially

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punctuality. I have to wait for

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time at

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bus

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station as the

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's timing does not match the time on the ticket. Every morning, my

work

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starts at 8:00, and the regular delay by your

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makes me late for

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, yesterday I missed my important meeting,

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showed me

unprofessional

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at my

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. Other passengers are facing the same issues. As a user, I would like to advise the company to take some steps in order to solve

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this problems

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, please inspect the timetable of the

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, make sure your driver starts

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on time.

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, the company must inform

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prior,

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some problems occur. I have implicit faith in you, and I believe you will solve

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matter very soon. Yours faithfully, Raj

rajwants.1997Wed Jul 03 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure the logical flow is clearer by using connectors effectively between your ideas. Mention specific problems with the bus service and their impact more explicitly, and divide thoughts into well-structured paragraphs.

task achievement

Avoid minor grammatical errors like 'dad showed me unprofessional' which should be 'that showed me to be unprofessional'. Also, note the correct use of apostrophes, for example, change 'its punctuality' instead of 'it's punctuality'.

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You addressed all parts of the task adequately, describing problems, their effects, and offering suggestions.

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Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this kind of letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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