A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council – Request that the person returns your bin immediately – Inform the person of what further actions you will take should they not return your bin
Dear Mrs Kaur,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I hope you've well settled in a new town. I am writing to seek your assistance in returning our garbage bin
that somebody took from your family last
evening.
I don't know why you don't have your own bin
as you must have it in your house rent. So, I think you can ask your owner who must be
capable Wrong verb form
is
to provide
youChange preposition
of providing
a
new garbage Add the preposition
with a
bin
, but if not, you must contact the local councils who will assist you for sure in providing a bin
of your choice.
I wish I could provide you a
Add the preposition
with a
bin
until you didn't get your new one ,but unfortunately, we've also
only one which is almost full everyday
, and I request you to Replace the word
every day
rerturn
our rubbish Correct your spelling
return
bin
as soon as possible because our last
night
garbage is still in our house, which is becoming the cause of malaria.
Change noun form
night's
Its
my humble request to you Replace the word
It's
It is
for returning
our Change preposition
to return
bin
, otherwise
I'd be left with no option rather than complaining to the local city council who will punish you with not only Correct article usage
a hevay
hevay
fine but Correct your spelling
heavy
also
you have to pay extra for your bin
.
I hope you'd
understand my concern, and I look forward to your prompt response.
Regards,
Amanjot Verb problem
you'll
kaur
.Change the capitalization
Kaur
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea and maintains clear focus on the main topic. This improves readability and coherence by making it easier for the reader to follow your argument or narrative.
logical structure
To improve logical structure, ensure that your points flow smoothly from one to the next. You can achieve this by using transitional words and phrases more effectively.
greeting and closing
The letter begins and ends with proper greetings and closings, which adds a level of formality and appropriateness for the situation.
suitable writing tone
The tone used in the letter is polite yet firm, which is suitable for addressing the issue at hand and requesting resolution.
complete response
The letter covers all the key points requested in the task: explaining how to source new bins, requesting the return of the bin, and informing of further actions. This shows a complete response to the task.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite