The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line chart illustrates the amount of
Australian
Correct your spelling
Australians
show examples
delivered abroad
with
Change preposition
to
show examples
four
countries
between 1990-2012.
Overall
, during
this
twenty-year period,
China
remained the biggest items shipped abroad from Australia, with all three other
countries
spending much less on them.
In
Correct your spelling
It
show examples
is conspicuous that Australian exportation to
China
was 2% in 1990, which
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
rose marginally to about 5% in the year 2000, after it skyrocketed till 2010, with a
further
increment reaching 30% in 2012.
However
, by 2000, the gap in exporting between
this
Correct determiner usage
these
show examples
two
countries
had widened and considerably more ship out was in
China
and India.
Index
Correct article usage
The index
show examples
of
China
start
Change the verb form
starts
show examples
form
Correct your spelling
from
show examples
5% and
end
Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
show examples
with
Change preposition
at
show examples
30%
as well as
India from 1% to 8%. As can be seen from the graph, the amount of send out
unchanged
Add a missing verb
was unchanged
show examples
or decreased in all four
countries
but rose
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
dramatically in
China
. The period between 2000 and 2010 saw a sharp growth.
Submitted by dnm.best on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, china with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!