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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide data about the consumption of water for a variety of purposes in six countries, namely North
America
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, South
America
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, Europe,Africa,Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
In addition
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,the three main objectives of use are for industrial, agricultural, and domestic fields.
Overall
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, it is obvious that the largest share of water used in every country is for agriculture excluding North
America
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 and Europe,which these two mainly used for manufacturing operations.
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, most
also
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 use them for the domestic fields the smallest proportion compared to other sectors. As far as the industrial sector is concerned, North
America
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 and Europe consume approximately half of the total and for domestic spending just over one-tenth
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 use in agriculture is about one-third,followed by domestic benefit with over one-tenth.
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, the four large countries spent more than four-fifths amount in Agriculture, with Central
Asia
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 spending the most at 88%,followed by Africa,South East
Asia
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, and South
America
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 with 84%,81%, and 71% respectively.
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,these consume them for industrial operations with around one-tenth, with Central
Asia
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 experiencing only 5%.
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