The diagrams below show two hostel rooms that can be occupied by several people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The picture gives data about two

hastle

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hassle

rooms that can be busy by many

students

on the university campus.

overall

, it is clear from the diagrams that there are five

building

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buildings

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students

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students'

student's

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accommodation

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accommodations

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scince

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science

since

building, arts building, another

students

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student's

students'

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accommodation, and

students

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students'

student's

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facilities - shops

offices

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and offices

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, it can be observed that there was a lace

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the

center

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centre

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. All the

building

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buildings

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facing

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face

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each other in

Circular

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a Circular

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shape.

According to

what is shown,

started

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from the entrance to the

steert

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street

start

on the lift we can see

arts

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the arts

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building,

near by

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the

arts

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building

scince bulding

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science building

In addition

, after a few

kilometers

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would see on the left the lake facing the

students

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student's

students'

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accommodation buildings.

Furthermore

, went straight forward and

tern

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then

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left to see the

students

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student's

students'

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facilities.

Moreover

, turn left and after

few

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a few

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kilometers

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kilometres

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turn left and

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the end of the road there

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are

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students

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students'

student's

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accommodations. In terms of the university

campus

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campus,

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there were a few bushes.

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1Word repetition
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4 paragraphs

155 words

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The diagrams below show two hostel rooms that can be occupied by several people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Write a letter to your landlord about an increase in rent that you don't think is justified. In your letter say: - Why you are writing - What the problems are - What you want the landlord to do

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for research.

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views.