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The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the global consumption, production and profit distribution of
coffee
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.
Overall
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, Europe and America drink more
coffee
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while
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 it is most dominantly produced in South Africa. The most profits go to delivery and exporters seem to gain the least money. Starting with the pie charts of the consumption and production of
coffee
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, Europe and America drink more
coffee
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 than other examined countries with 41% and 39% respectively
in contrast
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 to Japan, which only accounts for 8%.
In addition
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, another 12% of
coffee
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 consumption comes from the rest of the world. Regarding its production, South Africa produced by far the largest percentage of
coffee
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 at 44%
whereas
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 about half of
coffee
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 is almost equally produced by Indonesia, Japan and Vietnam with 22%, 18% and 16% respectively. Turning to the graph for the profit distribution, more than half of the financial gains go to delivery at 51%, followed by retailers which account for nearly half of delivery at 24%.
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, the rest of the earnings are obtained by producers and exporters with the former being slightly higher than the latter with 15% and 10% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • coffee production
  • coffee consumption
  • profit distribution
  • highest
  • lowest
  • concentrated
  • exporting countries
  • producer
  • consumer
  • significant difference
  • largest
  • territories
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