Fish pie production line The diagrams give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram depicts the production process of frozen

fish

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pie

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a commercial level.

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, the manufacturing procedure

possess

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two separate steps starting from, potato

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chips

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preparation and

fish

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slice preparation,

that

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are used together

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First,

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the potatoes that are transported to the factory during the month are thoroughly cleaned by machines.

Second,

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they are peeled before being sliced ​​into small

chips

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using knives. The sliced ​​potato

chips

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are

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boiled and cooled in a water bath before being packaged in large bags for storage.

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preperation

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preparation

of the

fish

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parts includes many other steps. Usually, the initial two steps are to be done before 12 hours from

fish

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delivery.At

first,

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the fresh salmon

fish

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are mixed with lemon juice and

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salted during that time and

then

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, they are steamed in a steam oven. Once the skin and the bones of those fishes are removed manually,

further

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inspection is done by a worker.

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, the modified

fish

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mixed with prepared peas and sauce and

finally

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with the stored potato

chips

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prepared in the earlier step.

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, the wrapping is done by a worker in a microwavable container including

fish

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potatoes and peas embedded in sauce in a ratio of 3

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9 into 12 and

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they are freezed before dispatching or stored.