Fish pie production line The diagrams give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the production process of frozen
fish
pie at a commercial level.
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Overall
, the manufacturing procedure involves two separate stages: potato chip preparation and Linking Words
fish
slice preparation, which are combined at the final step.
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First,
potatoes delivered to the factory are thoroughly cleaned by machines. Linking Words
Then
, they are peeled and sliced into small chips. The sliced potato chips are boiled, cooled in a water bath, and Linking Words
then
packaged in large bags for storage.
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, the preparation of the Linking Words
fish
includes several steps. These initial steps must be completed within 12 hours of Use synonyms
fish
delivery. Fresh salmon is mixed with lemon juice and salt, Use synonyms
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then
steamed in a steam oven. After steaming, the skin and bones are manually removed, and the Correct word choice
and then
fish
is inspected by a worker.
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Next,
the processed Linking Words
fish
is mixed with prepared peas and sauce. Use synonyms
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mixture is Linking Words
then
combined with the stored potato chips. Linking Words
Finally
, the assembled Linking Words
fish
pies are packaged in microwavable containers, with Use synonyms
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, potatoes, and peas embedded in sauce in a ratio of 3 to 9 to 12. The pies are Use synonyms
then
frozen before being dispatched or stored.Linking Words
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