The line graph below shows the avarage monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph below shows the avarage monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The present line chart compares data about the average number of monthly temperatures in 3 different major cities namely, Parise, Dubai, and
Sydney
.
Overall
,
Sydney
's trend is
in contrast
to other cities;
thereafter
, Dubai has more hotter time than
Sydney
and Paris.
According to
the diagram, in January the first city which has the highest degree is
Sydney
by 24 after that
this
line reduced to July and touched the lowest point at 13;
however
, the trend increased to 23 in December which is the same as in February;
moreover
, catch on the first level.
Nevertheless
, other metropolises have various trends. The second city is Dubai which in the initial 8 months , reached the peak in August by 26, but other times declined to 22 in the
last
month. The coldest town is Paris which has grown up graph. At the beginning has 5;
then
in July and August peaks at 20. Later falls to the figure
that is
equal to the first month.
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