The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Image: ielts-task-1-us-energy-consumption-line-graph
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The line graph compares the
the
data collected from the report in 2008 regarding energy utilisation in the USA since 1980 Remove the redundancy
apply
along with
its projection till 2023.
Overall
,we can see that petrol and oil was
used in the highest numbers in the beginning Change the verb form
were
as well as
it
continue to grow till its future predictions.Coal and gas Correct pronoun usage
apply
on the other hand
was
in the average use, Unnecessary verb
apply
however
, nuclear,solar/wind and hydrolic
,all showed Correct your spelling
hydraulic
hydraulics
least
Correct article usage
the least
units
in the whole period given.
Look
in detail, it shows that petrol and coal Wrong verb form
Looking
was
in highest Change the verb form
were
units
that
is
35 in 1980,Change the verb form
are
this
figure saw some fluctutaions
till 1995,after Correct your spelling
fluctuations
fluctuation
that
it grew and will reach its peak in 2023 Add a comma
that,
that
will be around more than 45nimts.Coal and gas Correct pronoun usage
which
was
only 20 and 15 Change the verb form
were
units
approx respectively and both saw fluctuations till 2015,then
natural gas showed plateau
and coal use will Correct article usage
a plateau
be
increase till 2023 and will reach approx Unnecessary verb
apply
till
25units approx.
Correct your spelling
25
On the other hand
,nuclear ,solar /wind, Correct word choice
and hydrolic
hydrolic
sources were in less in Correct your spelling
hydraulic
units
in
the beginning that was less than 5 Change the preposition
at
units
and it
remained less in Correct pronoun usage
they
units
throughout the period including its predicted period.Submitted by iqbal.kamran on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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