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You are get home and have a problem with a peace abhi equipment that you use for a job at a letter to the shop or company with supplied the equipment in your letter describe the problem with a equipment explain how problem is affecting your life say what you want to shop or company to do

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Dear sir, Hope
this
 letter finds you in good health.
last
 week, I ordered
keyboard
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a keyboard
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 for my personal computer but it malfunctions frequently during my work. Some letters are not responding when I am typing
as a result
 I frequently had to plug and unplug the computer switch
making
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causing
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disruption
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a disruption
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 in my performance. It is always
hetic
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hectic
 to go through
suchproblem
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such a problem
. I kindly request you to change the faulty parts as soon as possible with a new one making my daily routine easier.
your
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yours
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 sincerely Sailesh
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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