Your cat home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you you for your job write a letter to a shop or company with supplied the equipment describe the problem you had to recruitment explain how this problem is affecting you say when you want the shop to our company to do

Dear sir, Hope
this
letter finds you in good health.
Last
week, I ordered a keyboard for my personal computer from your store located in the city centre
wherevI
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where I
didn't have much time to discuss the problems am facing with my computer.As I bought a new keyboard thinking my problem would vanish,with your keyboard
also
it malfunctions frequently during my work. Some letters are not responding when I am typing ,as a
results
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, I frequently had to plug and unplug the computer switch causing disruption in my performance. It is always hectic to go through
such
a problem. As my project submission date is approaching failure to do so will give me a negative mark on my promotion. kindly request you to change the faulty parts as soon as possible with a new one making my daily routine easier. your's sincerely Sailesh
bista
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coherence cohesion
Try to structure your letter more clearly by ensuring each paragraph has a single, clear idea.
coherence cohesion
Proofread your writing to correct minor grammatical and spelling errors.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task, providing a clear description of the problem, explaining its impact, and specifying what you want the shop to do.
task achievement
Your tone is appropriate for a formal letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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