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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Bar chart shows the number of
wemen
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women
 going into higher education in
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UK
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the UK
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,
USA
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,
Ausralia
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Australia
, South
Korea
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 and
France
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 from 1980 and 2015.
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Australia
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gives
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had
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 the most
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school-leavers
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school leavers
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 in 1980, but
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USA
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the USA
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 became at the same
level
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with
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as
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Austrlia
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Australia
 in 2015. On
other
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the other
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 hand,
Uk
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, South
Korea
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 and
France
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 show
increasing
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an increasing
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 trend in the period . In 1980,
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Australia
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Australian
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 female
school-leavers
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going
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 to around 60%, higher than
USA
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 by 20%. From 1980 to 2015
Australia
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remaind
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remained
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level
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 at nearly 60% . By 2015,
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USA
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the USA
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following
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followed
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Australia
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 and became the
highest
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highest-level
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level
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contries
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countries
 at the same
level
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 at almost 60%. The other three top female
school-leavers
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 were
UK
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, South
Korea
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France
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. In 1980, these
countries
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countries'
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school-leavers
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around
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had around
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 34%, 39% and 50% levels respectively.
by
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By
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 2015,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 and
France
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became
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were
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 at the
smae
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same
level
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 at almost 55% ,
while
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 South
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korea
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Korea
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 showed
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an incraesing
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incraesing
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increasing
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reach
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reached
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 30%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, usa, korea, france, australia, school-leavers, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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