The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. Describe the information presented below. Comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
The bar graph illustrates the comparison of unpaid
work
hours
per week on the
average which are done by Correct article usage
apply
men
and females in various categories
.
The most significant facts
to emerge from Fix the agreement mistake
fact
this
graph are
the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
number
of children
significantly influences women
Change noun form
women's
work
hours
in a week while
the unpaid work
hours
for men
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
no
determined by Correct your spelling
not
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
children
.
Looking at the details, the number
of married women
and married men
without children
have slight differences where the group of married females work
around 30 hours
in
a week Change preposition
apply
while
married men
in this
categories
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category
work
about 19 hours
.
On the other hand
, the categories
of women
who have one and have more than three children
share almost a similar number
where the number
of weekly hours
they spend reach
around 52 and 55 Change the verb form
reaches
hours
respectively. Meanwhile, the group of married men
who have one and three childs
Correct your spelling
children
work
just under 20 hours
which is two times lower than married women
in the same categories
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, hours, men, categories, number, children, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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