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The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Both line graphs show changes over time, from 2005 to 2025 The graphs show information about mobile phones and fixed
phone
subscriptions
 respectively in Eritrea , India ,The UK and Uruguay.
Although
 they show different figures, they both remain relatively constant throughout the period.India showed a slight drop in mobile
phone
subscriptions
 in 2011 before starting to rise again by 2015. There is a small reduction in fixed telephone
subscriptions
 in the UK and India,
while
 Eritrea remains the same and Uruguay reports a small increase.
Although
 the UK has a high number of
this
 type of subscription, Uruguay shows the largest
overall
 increase. mobile
phone
subscriptions
 are generally higher than fixed phones over the same time period except for Eritrea where both types of
phone
subscriptions
 at the same rate
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, subscriptions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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