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The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart demonstrates the numbers of
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students
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 who studied in three
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countries including
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, Russia,
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 and America over 15 years from 2000 to 2015,
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,
it is clear that
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 America had the largest number of
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students
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.
Additionally
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, an upward trend
also
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 was detected in the same country.
However
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, the average
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number
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 of these
students
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 fluctuated throughout
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 period. In 2000,
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students
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 were only under 2
million
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 in America
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 increased gradually to 2
million
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 in 2005,doubled to 3
million
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 in 2010, and reached a peak at 5
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at the end
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 of
this
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 period.
On the other hand
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 ، these
students
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 were only 3
million
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, and 3.8
million
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 in 2000 in Russia, and
France
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 respectively. Both lines show a downward trend until reaches under 2
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 in 2010,and under 3
million
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 in
France
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.in2005. There was no change in the Number of
students
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 from 2005 to 2010 in
France
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.In the following five years ( 2010 - 2015),
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students
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 in these two countries went up to reach more than 4.5
million
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.
To sum up
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, the average numbers of
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students
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 were highly distributed in the American
school
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 compared
the
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 other two countries.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vietnamese, students, france, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • Vietnamese students
  • studying abroad
  • steady increase
  • significant growth
  • comparatively
  • percentage increase
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • chosen to study
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