The bar chart shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and the USA were asked what they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and the USA were asked what they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graphs demonstrate the comparison of
people
's opinions about the most essential factor to make a successful
business
in Europe and the
USA
.
Overall
, almost 40% of
people
of
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both countries agree that how the
business
is being managed plays a major role in its prosperity.
On the other hand
, the data shows that both European and
USA
citizens see political situations play little to no impact on
business
growth, followed by external factors with only 10% percentage of both nations voting for it. It is shown that
people
of the
USA
and Europe view the national economy as the third most crucial element to a promising
business
development with more or less 20% votes. It is known that
people
in the
USA
chose the personality of the director as the most significant reason behind a thriving
business
with almost 40% of them agreeing to it
while
the
Europian
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Europeans
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think that the
business
management system is still the most important factor.
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