The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of male and female Australian
with regular exercise in 2010.
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Australians
Overall
, there was a gradual reduction in the
physical activity in men as they aged from 15 to 44 Correct article usage
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years
old then
steadily increased as they age
. For women
, there was a stable increase in the
physical activity from 15 to 54 Correct article usage
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years
old, then
suffered a small drop in proportion
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the proportion
population
over 55 Add an article
the population
years
old. Generally, women
do more exercise than men except the age
of 15-24.
For men, the percentage of regular exercisers decline drastically from over half
of the population
in 15-24 age
to the lowest of 40% in the working population
of 35-44 years
old. However
, the proportion
rose steadily to almost half
of the population
in the age
group of 65 or above.
For women
, the proportion
of regularly exercised women
increase
from approximately Wrong verb form
increased
half
of the population
of teens to over half
of the population
in the age
group of 35 to 64 years
old. It then
dropped to lowest
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the lowest
proportion
of below half
of the population
in the elderly population
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