The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of male and female Use synonyms
Australian
with regular exercise in 2010.
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Australians
Overall
, there was a gradual reduction in Linking Words
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physical activity in men as they aged from 15 to 44 Correct article usage
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physical activity from 15 to 54 Correct article usage
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the population
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of 15-24.
For men, the percentage of regular exercisers decline drastically from over Use synonyms
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