The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart
give
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gives
an information
about the Remove the article
information
a piece of information
porpotion
of households which Correct your spelling
proportion
portion
either
in rented or owned Add a missing verb
are either
accommodation
in two countries England and Wales Use synonyms
on
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for
a
period from 1918 to 2011.
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the
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noteable
that both trends each other. The percentage of owned Correct your spelling
notable
noticeable
accommodation
increased significantly. Use synonyms
while
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,
the trend of households in rented Remove the comma
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accommodation
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decline
gradually over there years.Both reached Wrong verb form
declined
to
the same per range Change preposition
apply
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1971.
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in
household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
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was
the lowest at just under 30% , Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
started to go up Linking Words
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to reaches
reaches
more than 30 in the following 20 years. In the next 30 years (1961-1991) , there was Correct subject-verb agreement
reach
gradual
increase of about 10 % each year. After that , the percentage of owned Add an article
a gradual
accommodation
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reaches
the highest percentage of just below 70% in 2001 Wrong verb form
reached
,
and dropped to 63% in 2011.Remove the comma
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