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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts compare the amount of
water
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in
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 various purposes by using percentages in six continents around the earth.
Overall
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, the charts reveal that the majority of
water
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 usage in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and Southeast
Asia
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related
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 to agriculture,
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 North
America
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 and Europe are mainly used for industry.
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,
in
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apply
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North
America
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, Central
Asia
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 and Southeast
Asia
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 had the least significant in using
water
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 for domestic
use
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.
In addition
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, the amount of
water
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 used in industry made the lowest contribution in South
America
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, Africa, and Central
Asia
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.
According to
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 the data, 39% of
water
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 is recorded in North
America
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 for domestic purposes, 71% in South
America
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 and 32% in Europe.
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, for industrial
use
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, in North
America
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, South
America
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 and Europe around 48%, 10% and 53% respectively. Domestic
use
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 of
water
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 on those 3 continents is estimated at 10% to 20%.
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,
water
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 usage in Africa, Central
Asia
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 and Southeast
Asia
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 is mostly for agriculture, at approximately 80% to 90%. Compared to only around 10% for industrial and domestic
use
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 on those 3 continents

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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