The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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report derives from the above line graph which enumerates

four

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libraries namely, West Eaton, ryeslip, Sutton Wood, and Chuch Mount, and the figure

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for the

books

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they lent throughout

four

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months in 2014. As an initial overview, the

four

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bookstores did not lend more than 300

books

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during the entire period. Not only is

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point clear, but

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the least number of

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which were borrowed was 50. Notably, the Ryeslip Library's borrowing instalments plummeted over the

four

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months.

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, Sutton Wood's analysis showed that the number fluctuated, as it lent 250

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in June, and the number rose in July;

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, it collapsed dramatically in August and reached the vertex in September.

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these points, it was not common to borrow from West Eaton;

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, the figure of the borrowed

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rocketed and hit 150, and

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it reached a plateau. Church Mount started with 50

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as West Eaton, and it grew in July and hit 100.

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, it increased steadily.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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