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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 report derives from the above line graph which enumerates
four
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 libraries namely, West Eaton, ryeslip, Sutton Wood, and Chuch Mount, and the figure
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for the
books
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 they lent throughout
four
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 months in 2014. As an initial overview, the
four
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 bookstores did not lend more than 300
books
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 during the entire period. Not only is
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 point clear, but
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 the least number of
books
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 which were borrowed was 50. Notably, the Ryeslip Library's borrowing instalments plummeted over the
four
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 months.
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, Sutton Wood's analysis showed that the number fluctuated, as it lent 250
books
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 in June, and the number rose in July;
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, it collapsed dramatically in August and reached the vertex in September.
Besides
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 these points, it was not common to borrow from West Eaton;
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, the figure of the borrowed
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 rocketed and hit 150, and
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 it reached a plateau. Church Mount started with 50
books
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 as West Eaton, and it grew in July and hit 100.
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, it increased steadily.
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