You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the important event; apologise for the situation; suggest a new arrangement.
Dear Neha,
How're you doing
.
I'Change the punctuation
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m
writing to make an apology for not coming on a promise
Replace the word
promised
date
due to
an unforseen
incident Correct your spelling
unforeseen
has
arrived in my family.
As we discussed to get Correct pronoun usage
that has
along with
each other for a week after my final exams, even I've booked my ticket to
your way for Change preposition
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21st
of July and return on 28th July but Correct article usage
the 21st
unfortunately
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unfortunately,
this
date
has clashed with the date
of a retirement party of my grandfather which was not expected that earlier but due to
some famliy
problems we had to drag it a little bit earlier.
I'Correct your spelling
family
m
really sorry for not showing up on time
and even I'm
very shameful
for telling you Correct word choice
ashamed
this
much
late as you've already arranged so many things in advance which has not only wasted your Correct quantifier usage
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time
but also
your money. Also
, my cancellation has affected your holidays as you've not made any plan
even with your family, I'Fix the agreement mistake
plans
m
really sorry from the core of my heart.
I'm
ready to pay you back by arranging a trip to Goa for next
holidays which are coming soon in next month. What's your plan for Correct article usage
the next
upcoming
holidays? Will you be available for a week?. If not, suggest me a suitable Correct article usage
the upcoming
date
and time
according to
your plan, I'll
arrange my trip Correct word choice
and I'll
accordingly
.
I understand the importance of your time
and money but I'm
really sorry as all the situation was out of my hands. I look forward to your positive response.
Regards,
Amanjot Kaur.Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on
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general
To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea and maintain a clear logical flow and structure throughout the letter.
task achievement
To enhance task response, try to incorporate specific details about the important event and how the new arrangement fits into both your and your friend's schedule.
general
Proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and ensure sentences read smoothly.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is appropriately apologetic, which suits the purpose of the letter well.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are friendly and suitable for the context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite