The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four
countries
in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The Use synonyms
two
bar charts give the comparison between men and women working as employees of aged 60 to 64 in four nations, namely, Use synonyms
Australia
, Use synonyms
Japan
, Use synonyms
USA
, and Use synonyms
Beigium
in year 1970 and 2000.
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Overall
, the percentage of man's employment in aged 60 to 64 shrank over the four Linking Words
countries
in 2000. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
two
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countries
: Use synonyms
Australia
, and Use synonyms
USA
had increased by 2000, Use synonyms
however
other Linking Words
two
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countries
: Use synonyms
Japan
, and Use synonyms
Beigium
displayed a discline.
It can be clearly seem that, the percentage of man had worked as employees in Use synonyms
Beigium
were significant dropped from 79% in 1970 to 19% in 2000. In Use synonyms
Australia
, which was reduced 27 Use synonyms
percent
in 2000. Use synonyms
Further
, 18 Linking Words
percent
of man employees in 2000 had been dropped in Use synonyms
two
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countries
: Use synonyms
Japan
, and Use synonyms
USA
.
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On the other hand
, in Linking Words
Australia
, and Use synonyms
USA
, where women still worked in aged 60 to 64 were rose steady from 18 Use synonyms
percent
to 19 Use synonyms
percent
, and 36percent to 38 Use synonyms
percent
, from 1970 to 2000, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, other Linking Words
two
countires: Use synonyms
Beigium
, and Use synonyms
Japan
showed slightly decrease approximately 1 Use synonyms
percent
to 3 Use synonyms
percent
in 2000.Use synonyms
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