The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four
countries
in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The two
bar charts give the comparison between men and women working as employees of aged 60 to 64 in four nations, namely, Australia
, Japan
, USA
, and Beigium
in year 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, the percentage of man's employment in aged 60 to 64 shrank over the four countries
in 2000. In contrast
, two
countries
: Australia
, and USA
had increased by 2000, however
other two
countries
: Japan
, and Beigium
displayed a discline.
It can be clearly seem that, the percentage of man had worked as employees in Beigium
were significant dropped from 79% in 1970 to 19% in 2000. In Australia
, which was reduced 27 percent
in 2000. Further
, 18 percent
of man employees in 2000 had been dropped in two
countries
: Japan
, and USA
.
On the other hand
, in Australia
, and USA
, where women still worked in aged 60 to 64 were rose steady from 18 percent
to 19 percent
, and 36percent to 38 percent
, from 1970 to 2000, respectively. However
, other two
countires: Beigium
, and Japan
showed slightly decrease approximately 1 percent
to 3 percent
in 2000.Submitted by Date
on
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