Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days,

working

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the working

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environment has been changing

rapidly

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more rapidly

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than ever before

due to

innovation

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of

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the

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technology. Some believe that

work

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from

home

it

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would be better than travelling to a workplace every day. I think working from

home

has more

benefits

than drawbacks.

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essay discusses it briefly for the

further

explanations

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. There are two key advantages of

work

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working

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from

home

. One of the vital

benefits

is that it saves more commute

time

to

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workers

.

This

means they can simply

work

at

home

, and they do not

travel

to reach their companies; not only it

saves

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time

but

also

reducer

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reduces

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tiredness

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the tiredness

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of everyday

travel

for

work

. Another primary

menit

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point

is that it reduces

air

pollution

, which

travel

might be reduced so

air

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the air

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pollution

ratio

also

will be diminished because office goers are the main reason for increasing

pollution

.

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, in the pandemic situation,

air

pollution

has significantly reduced because

of

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workers

were

worked

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working

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at their

home

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homes

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. Henceforth,

work

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from

home

brings more

beneficials

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benefits

to society

as well as

individuals. Despite these

benefits

, there are two demerits of

this

trend. One of the major disadvantages is that

workers

might be affected

psychologicall

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psychologically

psychological

because they

are

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neither meet

them

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their

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collegues

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colleagues

nor communicate with them,

consequently

, it stimulates isolation, stress and depression.

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, during the pandemic

time

,

according to

the

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a

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survay

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survey

said that from India,

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the suicides

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suicides

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rate had increased than the previous period because

of

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apply

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workcers

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workers

did not have a chance

coupled with

share their feelings

to

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their friends.

Another significant demerits

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Another significant demerit

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of from

home

,

wonkere

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workers

wonkery

might bed

work

long hours rather than a standard

time

, so employer gives more talk to

workers

in

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every day, even

in

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at

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night

time

too. These are the drawbacks of

work

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working

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from

home

. In conclusion,

this

phenomenon saves

travel

time

and reduces tiredness

along with

diminishes

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diminishing

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air

pollution

, there are the advantages of

work

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working

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from

home

;

workers

might be Isolated and affected psychologically

as well

as

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and

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it brings long working hours of

work

at

home

, these are the disadvantages of

work

from

home

.

However

, I think

this

phenomenon has more

benefits

than drawbacks.