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The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.

The two charts below show the proportion of qualified graduates in a particular country. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
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The two pie charts provide information about the percentage of qualified alumni from universities in a nation over 28 years.
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, there was a significant change in course interest that was chosen by the students. Doctoral of
Arts
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 still the least popular major that was rarely chosen and the other grades in bachelor of
arts
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 was decreased significantly between 1980 and 2008.
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 with, in term of 1980, the highest proportion of preferable majors was a postgraduate degree in
science
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 with 29%,
then
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 the second rank was a
bachelor'sa
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bachelor's
degree in art with 25%, followed by the first degree in
science
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,
doctoral
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a doctoral
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 of
science
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, and master of
arts
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 at 19%, 13%, and 12%, respectively.
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, the most unpopular major was the doctoral of
arts
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, at 2%.
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, in the year 2008, the most chosen course by the students was PhD
science
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, at 30%,
then
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 continued with Master of
Science
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 and Bachelor of
Science
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 at 29% and 19%.
Next,
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in fourth place was Master of
Arts
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 with 13%, followed by First Grade of
Arts
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 at 11%.
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, the Doctoral of
Arts
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 was the least popular course with a percentage of 7%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words arts, science with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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