The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram illustrates
production
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the production
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of instant
noodles
where they use
flour
as the raw material.
Overall
, there are 8 stages involved starting from
flour
until cups of instant
noodles
are manufactured.
Firstly
,
flour
that is
kept at
storage
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silo will be brought to the factory
to begin
the production.
Secondly
,
flour
that has been mixed with water and oil will go through rollers to produce dough sheets.
On
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the next stage, the dough sheets will be run through the machines to be cut into strips and
then
several stripes of dough will be arranged in
same
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the same
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sizes of disc shape of
noodles
before being dipped into cooking oil and dried.
Then
the
noodles
discs will be transferred into
cups shaped
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cup-shaped
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containers in the sixth stage. Vegetables and spices will be added
into
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the cup to give
flavouring
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flavour
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before being
labeled
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labelled
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and sealed to be sold to consumers.
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