The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The

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presents a

buissnes

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business

district in the

town

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of Norbiton, and future ideas of the site. In the large picture, the main difference

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noticeable is the addition of

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housing

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and public facilities with the cost of the removals of

factories

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. On the first

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, it is shown that the

town

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of Norbiton is currently made up of

factories

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located mostly on the east

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that

also

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surrounds a branched

road

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on the east

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which leads into a roundabout at the centre still

surrouded

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surrounded

by

factories

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and

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further

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the further

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road

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that leads to the main

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located in the southmost region of the

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.

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,

on

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the northmost region of the

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a farmland is located

in

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that is

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seperated

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separated

separate

from the

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by a river.

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, the second

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presents us

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planned future development of the

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which shows a major change where all the

factories

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have been replaced with

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housing

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and public facilities. The previous

road

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is

further

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extended forming 2 new branches that

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to the northwest

area

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of the

town

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used for housing areas accompanied

with

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a

further

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branching of

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road

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the road

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from the main roundabout on the

northen

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northern

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of the

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that leads across the river. The

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in the northmost region of the

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has been added resulting

on

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the decreased size of the farmland to give space for a new housing

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to be developed.

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the east

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of the

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,

further

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housing

complex

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complexes

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are built accompanied

with

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by

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several public facilities

such

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as a playground, school, and a medical centre.

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the southwest

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of the

town

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but

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, the

area

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that was previously empty has been used to set up places for shops.

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, a smaller roundabout was built on the main

road

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that leads to the main roundabout located in the centre of the

town

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.