You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » write about the action you want the manager to take Write atleast 150words
Dear sir,
I was at your restaurant with my family
last
Saturday for a little hang out
. Based on my online search and reviews, I was excited to eventually Join the words
hangout
located
your store but on getting there, I had an awful experience and was dissatisfied with the meal.
I have been planning our 5th year wedding anniversary with my wife and I thought a family luxury hangout dinner Wrong verb form
locate
will
be a lovely event, so Wrong verb form
would
this
was the reason why we came to your restaurant. As a matter of fact, we travel down from Monaco to Paris for this
outing.
There are several issues with the meals, one is that, unlike your online menu list showing varieties of food, I was surprised to find out there were limited order
to make. My children have longed to have some gelato which we saw on your E-menu but not available at the Fix the agreement mistake
orders
eatry
. Correct your spelling
eatery
entry
Also
, even with the little
few restricted Correct word choice
apply
order
that we Fix the agreement mistake
orders
finally
made, I must state how terribly spicy they taste. We really felt disappointed and had to move out a
roadside coffee shop to complete our date.
In view of the above, and since I really love the Change preposition
of a
ambiance
of your store, I will appreciate Change the spelling
ambience
hosting
me and Correct pronoun usage
your hosting
family
Correct pronoun usage
my family
to
another Change preposition
for
tasteful
dinner free of charge. Replace the word
tasty
Otherwise
, I will request for
a full refund of all the bill spent. I will not hesitate to give my honest review about my experience on your Instagram account if I don't get a response from your team within a Change preposition
apply
weak
.
Thanks for your understanding and I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Moses.Correct your spelling
week
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task achievement
Your letter is comprehensive, addressing why you were at the restaurant, the problems you encountered, and the action you want the manager to take. To improve your task achievement, ensure that your writing is more specific and detailed about each problem and solution.
coherence
Your letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing. To enhance your coherence and cohesion, work on improving the logical flow between your paragraphs. Use more transitional phrases to guide the reader through your points smoothly.
cohesion
While the paragraphs logically cover individual ideas, aim to refine each paragraph to distinctly focus on one idea to fit your explanation better. Adding some transition words can further bolster paragraph organization.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite yet firm, which is suitable for a complaint scenario.
greeting closing
Good use of greeting and closing. This enhances the readability and professionalism of the letter.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.