The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015

The bar chart represents the counting of

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and paid

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4 categories.

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presentation is related to

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an Australian

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town from 2015.

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amount of individuals in other sectors

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referees had more paid

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.

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, working as a referee could not make an interest in both types of

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who were

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and paid

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, people whose attraction directed to that field were 30 and 40 respectively. When the count of

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for coaching was more than 70, the number of people who work for money, in

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field was only 45. In the therapist sector, the difference between paid and free

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was 2 people and they were counted as 40 and 42.

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,

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in other sections were 58

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and 48 paid

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.