The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015
The bar chart represents the counting of
volunteers
and paid workers
that has
4 categories.Change the verb form
have
This
presentation is related to Australian
town from 2015.
Correct article usage
an Australian
Overall
,it is clear that
that
Remove the redundancy
apply
volunteers
had greater
amount of individuals in other sectors Add an article
a greater
while
referees had more paid workers
.
However
, working as a referee could not make an interest in both types of workers
who were volunteers
and paid workers
, people whose attraction directed to that field were 30 and 40 respectively. When the count of volunteers
for coaching was more than 70, the number of people who work for money, in this
field was only 45.
In the therapist sector, the difference between paid and free workers
was 2 people and they were counted as 40 and 42. Moreover
, workers
in other sections were 58 volunteers
and 48 paid workers
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Vocabulary: Replace the words volunteers, workers with synonyms.
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