Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays,

traffic

jam causes many problems including

pollution

. Some

people

argue that the way to solve problems is to increase the gasoline

price

. In

this

essay, I will argue that I do not agree with

this

statement.

Due to

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, there are two ideas that I think can solve problems. One is public

transportation

is one of

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that can solve

this

problem on

traffic

problem.

Additionally

, the

pollution

law should be legislated. The main reason that I do not agree with

this

statement is that increasing the petrol

price

will not solve the

traffic

and

pollution

issue effectively. Some

people

use

private cars because they are not uncomfortable with public

transportation

.

For example

, the majority of

people

in Thailand decide to

use

their own car because public

transportation

is not available promptly. So, the increase in petrol

price

will not encourage

people

to not

use

private cars.

Nevertheless

, the government should thoroughly provide public

transportation

to encourage

people

who

use

private cars.

Additionally

,

traffic

is not the main reason to causes

pollution

issue. In my point of view, there are many factors that cause air

pollution

such

as modern manufacturing or waste incineration. The governments should legislate air

pollution

law which is a public law that can cure the

pollution

crisis.

To sum up

, measures that can fix both

traffic

and

pollution

issues

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not increasing the gasoline

price

but the government should legislate air

pollution

laws and encourage

people

to

use

public

transportation

.