The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces over a period of 5 years.

The chart represents

international

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the international

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students

percentage among university graduates in Canada over 5 years. New

Brunswick

stood in the first rank of international

students

share

compare

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to the other Canadian

Universities

.

Whereas

Ontario has the minimum proportion of international

students

over the periods.

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with, the graph

depict

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9

universities

with the most and the least international

students

in 2001 and 2006. In 2001, New

Brunswick

has

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the most international

students

,

following

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followed

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with

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by

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Nova Scotia and Quebec with over

than

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5%.

While

the rest of

universities

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the universities

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namely Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and

lastly

Ontario

has

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the least of international

students

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student

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population with just less than 5%.

However

, the

overall

of international

students

percentage in 2006 rapidly

growing

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grew

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.

Still

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in

the

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first place, New

Brunswick

leads the bar graph of the

students

with over

than

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apply

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10%

students

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of students

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. Nova Scotia and British Columbia ranked after with just a little bit over

than

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apply

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10%. The

others

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other

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universities

still maintained and experienced an

increasement

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increase

in the graph with more than 5% growth

overall

. In conclusion, between 2001 and 2006 there

were

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still an increase in the international

students

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student

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population.

Nevertheless

, New

Brunswick

always ranks

the

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apply

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first among

another

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another university

other universities

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universities

during the periods,

whereas

Ontario placed

in

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at

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the bottom with the least population.