The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about the number of British people’s
further
education
due to
periods whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
It can be seen that both men and women study more in part-time education
, but the full-time education
rates are lower.
In 1970, male students who chose part-time education
rate were at 1000 and the full-time rate was below 200. And choosing part-time decreased from 1000 to about 850, and the full-time a little bit increased. Finally
, the part-time rate increased to approximately 900, and full-time education
also
increased to over 200.
Female students choosing part-time education
increased constantly till the end of the 1990s. In 1970 the part-time rates increased by 650, 800, and 1100 respectively.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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