Mrs Barrette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter •Suggest how you could help her in her home •say why you would like to do this work •explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words

Dear Mrs Barrette, I am Lovely Sing, I saw your advertisement in today's newspaper that you are looking for someone to help you
in
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home for a few hours a day next summer. I am writing
this
letter to show my interest in helping you
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this
work. I am working in IT company from 2 to 10. That's why I have a lot of spare time in the morning time and can help you every day for 3 to 4 hours. As I am local here. 'If you want to find a new home' in that case
also
I can help you. Even from arranging the cleaning till
furniturs
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furniture
, I will be there. I know all the local shops to buy daily groceries at the correct price. I
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I can
help
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you with introducing the culture of
this
city with
their
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festivals. I can help you to manage to
joining
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local clubs to make new friends. I can help you with everything
want
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you want. Just let me know in which month you are going to travel and
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I will make the necessary arrangements for you. Thank you in advance. Regards, Lovely Sing.
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Make sure to review your letter for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing to improve clarity and readability.
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Try to organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, with each paragraph discussing a single main idea.
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Use more transitional phrases to improve the flow between your points and make the letter easier to follow.
task achievement
You provided specific examples of how you can help, which strengthens your application.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing were appropriate and polite.

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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