The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures illustrate how some areas

occurred changing

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changed

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at West

Park

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Secondary

School

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between 1950 and 2010. The most noticeable change was just south of the

school

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such

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as houses, a playground, a

sports

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field, and a car

park

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. First above, in 1950 there were some point areas in Secondary Schools consisting of houses to the right of the

school

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then

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the playground was behind the

school

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whereas

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to the left was farmland. Later on, the houses next to the

school

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(main building) that were removed became a car

park

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and a science block in 1980. As can be seen, farmland was changed to a

sports

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field in the same year. The third pictures show a slight change to the left of the secondary

school

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(main building), it was a

sports

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land that was removed from a car

park

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, so it became bigger than before. Meanwhile, the

sports

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field joined around ⅓ of the area's playground.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, sports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the fiture, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend on other things benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter •tell them when you will be arriving and leaving •explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost •ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel