You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pictures illustrate how some areas
occurred changing
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changed
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at West
Park
Secondary
School
between 1950 and 2010. The most noticeable change was just south of the
school
,
such
as houses, a playground, a
sports
field, and a car
park
. First above, in 1950 there were some point areas in Secondary Schools consisting of houses to the right of the
school
,
then
the playground was behind the
school
,
whereas
to the left was farmland. Later on, the houses next to the
school
(main building) that were removed became a car
park
and a science block in 1980. As can be seen, farmland was changed to a
sports
field in the same year. The third pictures show a slight change to the left of the secondary
school
(main building), it was a
sports
land that was removed from a car
park
, so it became bigger than before. Meanwhile, the
sports
field joined around ⅓ of the area's playground.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, sports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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