The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
charts
illustrate the share of various fuel sources for producing electricity in France
and Australia
in 1980 and 2000. It can be clearly seen that in Australia
, coal was the main source both in 1980 and 2000.
Looking at the pie charts
related to Australia
it is evident that the rate
of using coal for electricity production significantly increased from 50 units
in 1980 to 130 units
in 2000. Conversely
, the usage rate
for other fuel sources including oil, natural gas, and hydro power
experienced a sharp drop from 10,20 and 20 Correct your spelling
hydropower
units
to 2 units
for all the
three.
Moving on to the pie Correct article usage
apply
charts
related to france
, in 1980, the highest Change the capitalization
France
rate
belongs to natural gas and coal with both having 25 units
at
the whole share. Change preposition
in
In addition
, while
nuclear power was used at 15 units
Fix the agreement mistake
unit
rate
in 1980, its usage was surged
to 120 Change to the active voice
surged
units
in 2000. The use of oil , on the other
hand
remained approximately the same in both 1980 and 2000 with only 5 Add the comma(s)
hand,
units
difference, being higher in 2000.
Oversal
, comparing the Correct your spelling
Overall
charts
related to australia
and Change the capitalization
Australia
france
one significant difference is that Change the capitalization
France
while
nuclear power in Correct word choice
apply
france
was the major fuel source for electricity production in 2000. It was not used in Change the capitalization
France
australia
at all either in 1980 or 2000.Change the capitalization
Australia
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